By the way, I no longer do the 'ninja life' comic anymore. As you can probably tell from the title of this comic, it is now called Barely Listening, and I update it only on Drunk Duck. (Easier to see if people are comic or not) So drop by if you feel like it.
if you would like some suggestions read on. if not just ignore me. ;)
there are some very minor camera focus issues. but the only thing that will fix that kind of thing is taking lots of photos and figuring out how to get the shot in better focus. also I think this would be just that much better if you gave the set a tan desert seting. even if it's just a tan T-shirt.